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FIC: Lament

Title: Lament
Characters: Ten and Donna
Spoilers: Planet of the Ood
Author's Notes: Just watched Planet of the Ood. Subsequently committed drabble. So here it is, a tiny h/c missing scene. (Thanks to wendymr  for suggesting a title that worked better.)

“But you can still hear it!” she nearly sobs.

“All the time,” he replies, barely able to hear his own voice through the overpowering song.

It’s too much, too loud. He should turn away, but he can’t. He’s transfixed.

He bows his head until his forehead bangs against the bars. The song fills his mind.

Captivity. Anguish. Despair.

Suddenly, there are hands on his face, pulling him away.

It’s Donna. Why has she put her hands there? She can’t contact his mind this way.

She isn’t trying to. She’s wiping away his tears.

“We’ll help them,” she says resolutely.



Apr. 22nd, 2008 10:13 pm (UTC)
"He looked so close to tears when that scene ended, and then when we see them again they're both standing and looking composed, so we know a little moment or two of time has passed in between."

You know, I hadn't thought of it that way. Makes perfect sense.

"My mind automatically fills in little missing moments like that with H/C, and thus you get drabbles like this one."

Then I guess we're all grateful for the way your mind works :-)

Apr. 24th, 2008 02:48 pm (UTC)
As long as folks enjoy reading the end result, I'm happy. :-)


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